Scene 411 -
You’re late.
implies a moment just past the midpoint of a long journey (like a film or a novel). It is the "Information Scene"—the moment where the protagonist stops running and starts thinking. scene 411
They are alone. For the first time in 48 hours, the adrenaline has drained, leaving only a dull ache in their ribs and the taste of copper in their mouth. You’re late
I know what "411" stands for now.